TheJanitor9k's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Birth of a 2 x 4]

This is pretty good. The audio is lame but to fix it you need to seperately upload the audio seperately from the fla file.

twobyfour responds:

I know, i need to take a fucking course on audio processing in flash...feels like i've tried everything. but maybe I should try harder. Thanks for comin by, and stay tuned fo' mo'

[SealSurfer Animation Test]

Dat dive

BretLinne responds:

It is rather a fun dive.

[coffee]

Its alright. Audio was alright, the mouth animation was good but the spacing between the people talking was boring and really pulled me out of it. The pee talking back was funny though.

AniMate responds:

Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to pay more attention on the voice spacing in the future :)

This was my first finished animation so there are bound to be some mistakes, but I'll try to fix them in the future.

This kind of criticism is exactly what I'm looking for and what I need to make my work better, so thank you.

[Sasori's Destruction]

For a first attempt I would say that this is pretty solid. The dude looks good and the leap he makes looks very good.

SebzX12 responds:

thnx.

[Dead Of The Night]

This was most fantastic. Animation was very impressive and the music was great too.

TravelBySheep responds:

Thank you :D

[Give me Strength]

The drawings looked good and the audio mixing was a little quiet.

sketchysketchist responds:

Yeah sorry, I guess I should make sure it's louder.
Though I'm not the audio guy, I think he'd understand how to fix this.

[Jessie and Walt]

The art is good, not a fan of tweening but it looked fine. Audio was recorded really bad, and the script was meh. Overall its alright but check out audio mixing videos on youtube cause nothings worse than a good looking video bogged down with terrible audio.

MackleNG responds:

if i was the voice actor, and not just the animator, i would get to that

[Want fries with that?]

Poop, kinda had a joke about fries for my next video but I really enjoyed this. Writing was solid and the VO's were good.

JonSock responds:

damn i'm sorry about that inconvenience. thanks a lot though

[Friend Blender Unfinished]

Looks solid meng. Animation looks good and I like the roatationg slowdown whenever you hover over the blender with your mouse.

Bored4Fun responds:

Thank you. That code was pretty tricky. Originally wanted to make each character in the blender also be animated buttons, so that there'd be no need to select by name at the side. You can tell this was made specifically for my friends & family, cuz who else would know them by name? haha.

[Hyrule Warriors]

Looks good. Just please use compression for the audio on your next cartoon cause the high end on this is murder

Cameron-Ohara responds:

Thanks for the heads up! I'll be more careful with the audio next time.